Susan J. Farese of SJF Communications taught her 2 hour SJF Communications “Capturing Your Creativity with Haiku” workshop on May 24th at the Julian Branch Library. Many thanks to Josh Mitchell, Branch Manager and Friends of the Julian Library for hosting the workshop.
Mark was a solo attendee that day, and we made the best of it!
We began with an interactive fun ice breaker. After introductions and a review of her published work (with Haiku and other forms of poetry), Susan taught her Power Point presentation about writing Haiku and shared nature photography, including several photos of roses and flowers, plus other nature photos as prompts to encourage Haiku writing. We practiced writing Haiku and had the opportunity to share our work. It was a great discussion and we equally had so much to say about the creative process and the parallels with Haiku poetry and visual arts.
Here is a glimpse of us, along with the photo prompts and written Haiku for the afternoon.
Susan Mark and SusanSusan and Josh (Library Branch Manager)
Capturing Your Creativity With Haiku at the Julian Branch Library 5/24/2022
Moon Rise and Yellow Traffic Light (Photo by Susan J. Farese)
Rings of Gold
electric yellow
round, in a black box says slow
in sunlit moonrise
– Mark
Moonrise/Yellow Light
Moon rose to the east
Yellow traffic light appeared
Serendipity
-Susan
Pacific Highlands Ranch Trail (Photo by Susan J. Farese)
Earth and Sky
dusty clay stretches
around a corner….fading
cool clouds pressing down
-Mark
Mysterious Orange Flower (Photo by Susan J. Farese)
Mysterious Orange Flower
Orange yellow hues
Veinlike markings encircle
A bursting flower
-Susan
Bench at Santee Lakes (Photo by Susan J. Farese)
Bench at Santee Lakes
Bench solitude
Lonely, uninhabited
Summer pause, sit down!
-Susan
Blooming Jacarandas in May (Photo by Susan J. Farese)
Blooming Jacarandas in May
Hues of violet
Lilac-blue and trumpet-shaped
Jacaranda tree!
A late Spring bloomer
Colorful, urban flower
Bravely blooms with awe
-Susan
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Eight women attended our 2 hour SJF Communications Haiku workshop ‘Capturing Your Creativity With Haiku’ on January 18th, 2020 at the Poway Community Library.
We began with an interactive fun ‘ice-breaker’ – getting to know each other a bit more. Next, after introductions and a review of my work with poetry, I taught my Power Point presentation about writing Haiku and shared several of my nature photography and other photos as prompts to encourage Haiku writing. Everyone practiced writing Haiku and finally we had the opportunity to share our work. It was a delightful time with such a lovely group of creative empowered women!
Here’s a glimpse of our enlightened attendees along with photo prompts and written Haiku from that day! I also contributed a few!
Workshop leader/presenter Susan J. Farese with attendees (Back Row): Grace, Karen, Karla, Ninon, Laurie and Cheran; (Front Row): Kathy and Xochih.
1. Tahquitz Canyon Waterfall Photo by Susan J. Farese
Water tumbles down
forest leaves reach for the ground
a cool pool, respite.
-Karen
Waterfall rushing
thundering sound breaks silence
in awe of nature
-Cheran
2. Bench at Santee Lakes Photo by Susan J. Farese
A bench welcomes me-
have a seat and rest yourself
just breathe in and out
-Cheran
A bench beckons you
verdant grass and flowing
rest and contemplate
-Karen
Our summer is gone
and no one is sitting here
on the lonely bench
And in Japanese:
私たちの夏は去りました
そして誰もここに座っていません
孤独なベンチで
Watashitachi no natsu wa sarimashita soshite dare mo koko ni
suwatte imasen kodokuna benchi de
-Grace
3. Moon Rise and Yellow Traffic Light Photo by Susan J. Farese
A long day has passed
amidst the busy hustle
the bright moon greets me
-Karen
When I’m coming home
showing the same shape as moon
the yellow signal!
And in Japanese
家に帰るとき
月と同じ形を示す
黄色の信号！
Ie ni kaeru toki tsuki to onaji katachi o shimesu kiiro no
shingō!
-Grace
All of a sudden
moon rose, traffic light yellow-
serendipity!
-Susan
4. Anna’s Hummingbird Feasting Photo by Susan J. Farese
Little hummer sits
head bent prayerfully drinking-
a blessed moment!
-Cheran
5. Torrey Pines State Beach Photo by Susan J. Farese
Earth and ocean meet
waves crash and rocks tumble down
the clouds bear witness
-Karen
6. Great White Egret at Santee Lakes Photo by Susan J. Farese
The water glistened
fanned plumage captivating!
Great White Egret soared!
-Susan
Legs stretched, beak pointed
wings forming mushroom bellows
ready to take flight
-Cheran
Very beautiful
the open wings are such fun
The Great White Egret
And in Japanese:
非常に美しい
開いた翼はとても楽しい
白eg鳥
Hijō ni utsukushī aita tsubasa wa totemo tanoshī shiro eg
tori
-Grace
7. Autumn Photo Credit: Unknown
Crimson foliage
flutters from the azure sky
float on silent lakes.
-Karen
Beautiful red leaves
showing us their reflection
on an Autumn lake
And in Japanese:
美しい紅葉
彼らの反射を見せて
秋の湖で
Utsukushī kōyō karera no hansha o misete akinoumi de
-Grace
8. Two Egrets at Torrey Pines State Beach Photo by Susan J. Farese
Birds stop for a chat
beaks greeting in warm friendship
Oh glorious morn!
9. Trail at Pacific Highlands Ranch, Carmel Valley, San Diego Photo by Susan J. Farese
Beginning right now
feeling earth beneath my feet
starting my journey
-Karla
10. Sunset Cliffs Photo by Susan J. Farese
Jagged rocky edge
salty waves roll in and out
cares ride on the waves
-Karla
The waves foaming white
rocks sure of their position
jutting out to sea
-Cheran
The Oceans spirit
awakens my soul and heart-
quiets my deep pain
-Laurie
Rigid and solid
stone is no match for water-
time transforms all things
-Ninon
11. Joshua Tree Flowers photo by Susan J. Farese
Purple flowers stand
along the desert valley
embracing simple
-Karla
Fields of purple blooms
swaying gently in the breeze
Mother Earth awakes!
-Ninon
12. Snow! Photo credit: Unknown
Snow, ice and water
winter chill invigorates
the body and soul
-Ninon
13. Coachella Valley Preserve – Thousand Palms Oasis McCallum Pond Photo by Susan J. Farese
Santee Lakes in San Diego County is a great place for bird and waterfowl watching! So many varieties can be spotted throughout the year! Here is a PDF Santee Lakes Birdlist as of 2016.
I’ve made a short video from my brief visit the other day. A Great White Egret was the highlight! Also spotted Wood Ducks, Great Blue Heron, Mallards, Canada Geese, Pied-Billed Grebe, and of course, Coots!
My husband and I recently thoroughly enjoyed an afternoon at Santee Lakes. We walked around several of the lakes for fitness and I did some incredible bird watching!
